Life-Time Issue 1 Pg.19
On the other side of Chicago, in a night club with jarring Enrique music….
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I’m really liking this story.
I’m also imagining that the protagonist and his assailants aren’t the first time-travellers, which means that they have a chance to run into corpses trapped in moments, that have nothing to do with their chase. Maybe the identity of any such corpse is plot-relevant, but it doesn’t have to be. It could be lore-establishing (“The corpse is wearing a white lab coat and acidproof shoes. This must be the corpse of that scientist who inspired the one who everyone thinks invented time travel.”) or even a source of “answer by chance” items (“Wait a minute! Acidproof shoes? That’s it! That’s how I’ll get out of this mess!”) even though I have yet to see you do internal monologues like that (yet?). I have seen you do “answer by chance” though. The vase.
Just ideas!
Hello, Siva,
Thanx for the comment.
Glad you like the story. It’s a bit of a mystery itself. Won’t be good if I give it away. Your ideas are great but the story has been woven on some non-fictional facts. Although, it’s fiction, I keep it balanced between the fiction and real. So, using any new ideas would probably change the whole foundation of the plot.
For internal monologues, they were somehow clashing with another idea I had. So, I thought of not using monologues. Without monologs it may get a little monotonous, but it does go with the tone of the story.
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Thanx.
I have no idea what sort of story you’re working on. I notice that the people you have, only freeze time, that somehow, the chasers are able to not be frozen in time when the protagonist has frozen it for all but himself. I imagine he has a device with a start/stop button, but the chasers’ each having one too, doesn’t seem like what’s going on. More like they have something that makes them immune to time stopping when the protagonist makes that happen, but they can’t stop or start the effect. It made the chase scene sort of like an old 8-bit game, because of that.
On page1, we’re already in still time. So when a person jumps from frozen moment to the real time, he freezes himself becuz he’s now in real time. While the others chasing him in that moment have no affect on themselves. Only way to catch him will be if they jump to real time themselves. See page 1 carefully. Thanx.
The thing about corpses trapped in a moment is, the only bacteria etc. that can decompose them, are also trapped in that moment. If there are any. I’m not sure how what you’re doing, works. Is it area-of-effect, so that a person is definitely in a frozen-time moment, and protagonist and chasers are all wearing something as close to their centres as possible (a device on their belts, for example?) I suspect, since your dancer is as-yet uninvolved, that if it’s AoE, she’s going to get too close to a device of someone’s, and then… and then I don’t know.
Well, yes. Every second is a new second. There can’t be any trapped corpses becuz it’s a new moment, being frozen, that hasn’t come before. About the new character, you’ll know soon. There are some blog posts on the character, if you’d like to check out. On the blog page see for mariah intro. Thanx for the comment.